Try waiting a year or so before telling me you'll NEVER LET ME GO."What's poppin? "I’m the fish that gets thrown back in the water :(" - I dream of the day I meet a girl that gives me my first suicide note.
Your goal should be that the tagline isn’t wrong, dumb-sounding, but exciting. What this conveys is an extreme lack of creativity.
These headlines do not stick out and they’re just plain old lame. In fact, studies show that one of the biggest turn-offs for men and women is cheesy pickup lines. “I might be the one,” “Howdy,” and “Looking to meet new people” are all overused headers and, for the most part, unnecessary statements.
Search through the site, and analyze the headers that make you pause.
Men should spend a couple of minutes browsing through the men's ads and read the headlines that are competing for attention. This will give you an idea of how to make your headline scream out for attention - head and shoulders above the rest!
Headlines I've come across: So a baby seal walks into a club...